Feedback

Through out the feedback we have received much praise for the chase scene with the music to set the mood. The feedback tells us the chase scene was done right as chase scenes in thrillers are critical. Another positive feedback was the acting with the deep breathing to help set the mood. Other positive feedback was the plate smashing with the special affects, the lighting from the torch allowing the audience to see what was going on and the credits were done right as it was set in the right place in between scenes.

The negative feedback was related to the screenplay as many people did not understand the plot, for why the woman switched off the light, why the woman ran upstairs and hid inside a closet when the man was outside, the lighting over all as it was shot in the dark and hard to see. Another negative point was that when in first persons view it is a mans hand that switches off the light and has the deep breathing when it is meant to be a woman.

From the feedback the main points for improvement was the plot and the lighting as it was too dark for people to see in the dark and know what is going on and the plot for people to know why things are happening. ( even though it is apart of the enigmas)

The enigmas that are brought up by the feedback were good as many people asked questions as this part was for the enigmas which is what we are looking for. The enigmas people felt were;
who was the man, why he was chasing her. Another question was raised was why did she hide in the closet, why switch off the lights and hide in the closet when he is outside. These are the questions raised from our feedback sheets.


Created and edited by Khurram Aziz